2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(31):助人为乐

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I returned to home last night.It was rained last night,and I forgot to get umbrella.The umbrella was lost in the classroom.I was very anxious because of the heavy rain.When I was very anxious,I saw my best friend was coming with an umbrella in his hand.My best friend came and told me that my umbrella was lost.I was very excited to recieved the umbrella.And I was veryexcited with his help. In my opinion,we should help others when them in trouble.Only in this way can we become more popular.