作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
It's a long time since we last met.How is everything going with you?I'm writing to tell you the good news that there will be a talent show named "Speak Chinese and Sing chinese songs". I know that you are burned in your study in a Beijing university,learning Chinese.And i think it is a good chance for you to improve your English,during which you can not only speak Chinese better but also know the Chinese culture better.So if you feel interested in it,you can sign your name in Beijing TV before June 30th.And the time of taking part in the competition is July 18th. I do hope that you can make great progress through the competition,and i'm ready to lend you a hand at any time if you need. Looking forward to your early reply.