2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(31):助人为乐

单词拼写做的很棒，还请注意增加词汇的积累；作者在句法层面做的很棒；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用；请注意分段。

Mother is praised by people around the world, indeed, mother is so great, she gives birth to us, teaching us how to face the world and takes care of us all the time. If you ask me who is the most beautiful person in the world, there is no doubt that my mother is the most beautiful person in my eye. I love her so much, no one can take place of her. If you are asked who you think is the most beautiful person in the world, I will say that my mother is the most beautiful person in the world, she means so much to me. She is the person who takes care of me all the time, when I feel unhappy, she is the first one realizes it and comfort me. My mother is a homely woman, but she is kind-hearted, I love her so much.