2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(31):助人为乐

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Last Saturday, some of my classmates and I went to the Qiandao lake for some refreshment. Suddenly I noticed an old dustman collecting rubbish thrown about by the visitors. He was apparently having great difficulty collecting some small items, especially cigarette butts. An idea struck me. Why not help him collect litter? Much to my joy, all my classmates agreed and were willing to help. So we worked hard together with the dustman and collected lots of rubbish. Then we parted and waved farewell to the thankful dustman. Dog-tired as I was, I felt really happy. As the saying goes, ehelping hands are more sacrd than praying lips. I truly believe we’d have a more harmonious society if everybody took action. What a fine deed!