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the botanical garden植物园
【高频词句】
assemble集合
enter name报名
left baggage office行李寄存处
1．According to the schedule，the touring will include…根据计划安排，旅行路线是…
2．Please be on time．请务必准时。
3．You call leave your baggage in the left．可将行李放在寄存处。
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Notice The college freshmen students will have a autumn outing on December 27th. On the morning of that day, you will be visiting the botanical garden and watch the exposition of Human and Nature. After that, the students will be scheduled to visit the Summer Palace where you may spend the whole afternoon. Those whol want to take part in the activity should enter your names at the Students' Union. Please assemble at the college gate at 7 o'clock on December 27th. To bring your launch with you. What's more, you can leave your baggage in the left. Please be on time. the Students' Union
