托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第49篇:坚持不懈是否能让人变得更加强壮

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Many people believe perseverance makes people stronger,but I don't agree with all of that. I don't agree with that,The reason is following: everyone is different,you must know about yourself well before you carry out your plan.For example,if you have hurt your waist,and you haven't recovered,can you persever to practise the uplifting?The answer is sure:NO.At that time,you must stop and have a rest,not just to persevere in practising,if not,you will hurt yourself more. on the contrary hand,when we are healthy,we must exercise every day to become more healthy or more stronger.Yes,we know it's very difficult for everyone to persever exercising every day,but we must insist on doing it.Have you image your old life?If you are sick,you have to stay in the hospital,you can accept or admire that kind of life?Exactly no one likes that life.So we must change our daily life,especially we must persevere exercise every day.Once we begin,we must persevere it during the beginning 20 days,after that,you are accustomed to exercise every day,that will be the part of your life. The conclusion is that before we make our plan,you must know about yourself well,if your condition is ok,then go to take an exercise,and percevere it,then you will gain a stronger and more healthy body,and you will enjoy a wonderful life too. Do it,follow it.