小学三年级英语作文:My school

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My school My school name is red star school. My school is very big,very beautiful.Oh,it is a big tree.It is 50 years old.There are some flowers under the tree.We 've got a pretty garden,a swimming pool ,a dining room,a playgeound,a library,a Art room,a Sports centre``````In the classroom,some children are reading books. I love my school.