小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good acquaintance whose name is Lily.She is a beautiful girl who has a long black hair,two big black eyes and a red mouth.What's more,she is good at singing for her good voice. Meanwhile,she is a clever and nice girl.In her rest time,she likes reading books,playing computer and chess.When her friends have some problems in homework,she often helps them in pleasure.We all like her very much.