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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36985
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
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My friend's name is Lazzat. She is 31 years old. Her day very busy, because she is a doctor, she work in hospital everyday. She has a very beautiful eyes, and her hair very long and black. She not very tall. She likes eating, sleeping and writing. Today she called me that she will go to abroad. She is so happy and feel very lucy. She is my favaret friend.

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