高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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My home In the past, we saw our village surrounded with the green trees and hills. we also saw the naught fish in the clear river.The houses are simple and old, and the street is narrow.People worked hard but the live is poor.However, we can see the high building and industry and stores.the big or small cars can drive in the street.Although the town is developed, the town enironment changes bad.The enironment of industry becomes more and more deteriorated.The wooden is less and less,and the fish is dispear.Therefore, we must dealt with the pollution at first.