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When it comes to life,there are different definitions in our mind. Someone believe that money is the source of the happy life.But not all people agree it,they try their utmost to make life meaningful. As the hoeat comment mention about"The greatest use of life is to spend it for something t hat will outlast it.Life's deadline may be short .However, it is diffcult for us to make greatst use of life. Take an infulential singer for example,his name was Congfei, a great man was remenbered by everyone.He generously donated his all money to moutainous area's children .But as for himself, he was so mean ,even if he diagnosed having cancer,he would rather ues money to more needy people.Although his life was shorter than the peers, his spirt and soul still be outlasted. In my perspective, it is filled with sweety and bitter in our common life. But I am ongoing keep a postive attitude toward it, and bearing in mind that smile is the source of happy.
