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Everyone wants to be happy. But like the saying goes, life is not equal to idea nine times out of ten. So we have to learn how to deal with problems, instead wish no problem come up. That is we should understand that happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them. For example, when I first came to my college, I missed my family very much. "I want to go home." I thought like this. But I must stayed here for my courses. I was so missing them that it had influenced my daily life, though I could phoned them. I was unhappy, and did not want to do anything, including study. Little by little, with the help of my teacher, parents and calssmates, I began to learn how to deal with this problem, I can listen to music, watch moives, chatting with others, etc. In a word, do something which can transfer my attention. In the meanwhile, try my best to study my courses at school and enjoy the time at home. Now, I can do like this, and I am happy.
