小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My good friend I have a good firend,his name is Tom,he is twenty eight years old. We know since ten years old ago,we still keep friendship until now.His tall neither high nor short,he has a round face and bright eyes.His hair is black short.he often wears blue jack and brown trouses.