单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用;请注意分段。
My best friend in junior school is ZouXueyan.She is a lovely girl.And she likes to help others who are in trouble.She studies hard so she becomes a good student in our class. Xueyan's house is near to our house.So I often go to her home and play with her.Soon I am familiar with her family.