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小学三年级英语作文:My school

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:55浏览次数:6008
要求:
用英语描述下自己的学校,字数在100字以内。
用户的作文(系统评分35.5分
评语:

单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;语言不流畅;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。

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