2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；文中缺乏丰富的词汇表达，但词汇拼写要更加认真。

shopping online have been a popular way to buy something from the interent . it is a fashion style that is good to people.but shopping online also have some problem. first,i believe that you buy something in the internet will not make sure the thing is good.Then the thing maybe is unsuit to yourself.second shopping online is not useful to get some corret thing.on the otherhand , shopping online is more quick than shopping in the street.and you can choose more and more things.so it will be more better in the future. i think if we build a healthy market on the internet and let saler to be honest.at last we can have a perfect shopping online experience.