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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40892
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熟练使用了一些长难句;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;作者能词汇表达较准确熟练,但请仔细检查词汇的拼写;请注意分段。

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now people in siginificate numbers are coming to think about why it is unwise to judge a person by their appearence .perhaps ti is time to have a fresh look at the attitude In my opinions,firstly ,it is obviously unwise to judge a person just by their appearance.As everybody knows,a man,who has many diffrent aspects,so it is one side to do that. for example,the man,who is a woker as for the company and then he must be more seriously to defeat the troubles.But he is a children as for their parents and then he become more warmthly. so we can not judge the character of the person by their appearance Following the reason is that sometimes wo want to make friend with a stranger,we will talk about many diffrent things ,such as,study and entertainment.throg the way ,we can to judge whethe our friendeship can be development deeply or not .rathe than juedge it by the appearance In a world,if we juedge a person by their appearance,we must be deemed to a vulgar people and can not make deeply friend obviously

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