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now people in siginificate numbers are coming to think about why it is unwise to judge a person by their appearence .perhaps ti is time to have a fresh look at the attitude In my opinions,firstly ,it is obviously unwise to judge a person just by their appearance.As everybody knows,a man,who has many diffrent aspects,so it is one side to do that. for example,the man,who is a woker as for the company and then he must be more seriously to defeat the troubles.But he is a children as for their parents and then he become more warmthly. so we can not judge the character of the person by their appearance Following the reason is that sometimes wo want to make friend with a stranger,we will talk about many diffrent things ,such as,study and entertainment.throg the way ,we can to judge whethe our friendeship can be development deeply or not .rathe than juedge it by the appearance In a world,if we juedge a person by their appearance,we must be deemed to a vulgar people and can not make deeply friend obviously
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