高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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i used to live in a small town-----langhe . my parents were worked in a small factory. that factory located in a beautiful valley. I used to climb mountain in summer to have a good view on family area.I also liked to go to swimming when in hot days. In winter. My friends and me enjoyed snow,running crazy. Ten years passed. friends and me have moved to a modern city for long. I have backed there for two times . everything does not change, but there are not too many people. it keep quiet ,it like to keep waiting us back to take back that old happy time.