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2001年1月英语六级作文真题:面试成功的因素

发布时间:2013-05-14 19:08浏览次数:2299
要求:

Directions:  For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How to Succeed in a Job Interview? You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 

1. 面试在求职过程中的作用  

2. 取得面试成功的因素:仪表、举止谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是……   

用户的作文(系统评分74.0分
评语:

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但学术词汇稍显不足;适当增加一些从句的使用,会为文章添彩;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

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How to Succeed in a Job Interview recently years,so many Chinese youngster have to face one thing : job. there is some reason why youngster feel find a pleasant job is so hard? cause the population of China almost 14 billion , and we also a developing country,so maybe the salary isn't well at the beginning. so when we have a good opportunity to interview a satisfied job, what should we care about? the first thing i thought is confident.cause you'll meet the employee face to face ,people can see your emotion on your face,so if you have anything wrong,they can feel it. some interviewer may say my professional skill isn't well, how could i be confidence? so this another important factor.you should trust yourself first,so others will trust you.maybe you're not good enough, but you should let them know you eager to learn, you have passion and determination to finish the work as better as you can.by the way,you should more politely, is a basic upbringing. above all,the succeed decide on your hand,you do better ,everything be better.

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