托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；熟练的使用了从句和复杂句；词汇表达较灵活准确，学术词汇使用过少，另外注意文中个别的拼写错误。

Living in the rural area of living in the city,it is difficult to decided,because every one has to earn his own life and burden his family,especially once one is the parents of kids,he has to consider how to educate his children well,and at the same time,his own parents are old enough,he has to consider to live where is near the hospital.So under this situation,he has no choice to choose the rural area or the city,he has to live in the city. But one is old enough,and he needn't consider the curitity of his parents and the education of his kids,especially he saves enough money or he has special skills that can support his later life,I believe ,the rural life is more wonderful than the city life. You know,our life is limited,we must leave some free time to ourfelf,free our heart,breeth the fresh air,do something what we want to do,not just struggle in the mega city for the life. If I can chose,I would like to live in the rural area to have my own life,but the present time I have to give it up,because I have to struggle for my own life、my young son and my old parents.