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I am very happy to visite you to my hometown.firstly,I am fron GanSu provience and there are many mountains that all very tall.if you come with me ,we will to go to hanghe stones,which are many small hills like a forest,so it called stone-forest.sconedly place is hanghe,at there we can on a smaller boat that be made from the fur from sheeps.it very excente.and last is donghuang where be made in han danicy. beside I will take you to eat our town very famous food,lanzhou's noodull.I believe you will like to eat it . I forward to your coming.
