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2002年专业四级英语作文真题:保持健康

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:17浏览次数:1975
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题目 The Best Way to Stay Healthy
说明 Nowadays people are becoming increasingly aware of the importance of health.  And they have different ways to stay healthy. For example, some exercise every day; others try to keep a balanced diet.  What do you think is the best way to stay healthy?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分78.0分
评语:

拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

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The Best Way to Stay Healthy Staying healthy has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to day life.Ways to stay healthy are quiet different.I would like to suggest a way to solve the problem. First and foremost,it is pretty great if you have a balanced diet.A balanced diet is useful for you to keep fit.If you eat too much,you may get into the trouble caused by obesity.On the contrary,if you eat too little,you may suffer stomach trouble.Besides,having a healthy lifestyle is essential.Early to get up and early to sleep is also important.Having your meals in time cannot be ignorant,either.Last but not least,doing some proper exercises in your spare time will give a strong body.The more you do exercises,the better your body will be. I hope that my ideas and suggestions will contribute a lot to stay healthy.

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