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I assume that you are familiar with the words “it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket". Definitely, putting all eggs in one basket, it not only maybe lose all the things you have in one's mistake,but also will give up lots of other changes.It is obvious that don't put all eggs in one basket. Simple as ancient’s remark may sound, it contains abundant life philosophy and informs us of the significance of route of retreat. It play an indispensable role in our life . Making youself have another way to choose will enable us to achieve our objectives more smoothly and realize our dreams more rapidly. The more changes you have choose, the less you have lost. Quite a few examples can be given to prove the importance of it, however, I can think of no better illustration than the following one: how could Buffett do investment, if he failed to do sth. From my perspective, at no time should we ignore the importance of spreading risk. Accordingly，we should not put all eggs in one basket and always bear in mind that spreading risk can make us get more.“it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.” A famous philosopher also once said.
