2007年专四作文真题:关于网络交友

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with the modern pace accelerating and the development of the internet ,internet has already enjoyed great popularity among people and it is the main methods to convey the information,however,internet is the double-edged sword and bring about many problems which can not be ingorned, making friends online is one of it that we should treat equally and fairly,i hold that we can make friends appropriately on line for the following reasons. first and foremost, it is a mordern society that requring us to follow the morden trend , making friends online can open up our sights to ouside world and helps us to broden our social relationgship,which is necessary to our later job.