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Hello everyone.My name is jack.I'm a middle student.I used to be a bad student,but when I saw my mother crying in front of me.I decided to work hard and didn't make my mother sad anymore.I began to listen to teahers carefully.After one year.I had improved a lot.What's more,I am become more and more polite,and I made a lot friends.I always do some sports with my friends.I think hobby can change one person just like me.
