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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13038
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分66.0分
评语:

作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;文中能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇,但词汇表达多样性不高,拼写检查还需加强。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays there are many ways for us to communicate with others.We can chat with our friends online. we can share our recent exprience with our parents by telephone. And we also can make contact with our remote friend by e-mail or have a look on them through video online.So, as far as I am concerned , the commnication is very impotant for the follwing reasons. First,understanding is the essential way for us to make friends.By commnicate with others,we know their hobbies,and interests.Then we can find the contact between us,which can help us become friends. Second,in a enterprise, it is very impotant for the collegue to understand each other.only by talking with each other,they can learn the exact meaning of the other',which will do benefit to the interets of company. To sum up,commnication is just like a brige to contact the gap between heart to heart.

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