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题目要求：
Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us all want to do the same and look the same. Do you agree or disagree?
题目讲解：
题义理解上有那么一点难！但是总之都跟广告有关。
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Today ,many people are in opinion in that there are too many advertisements in the media which would make everyone be the same. They consider each person should has their personality. In my view , It should be noticed everything have the benefit and drawbacks, but i consider there are more benefits than disadvantage with the advertisement. Primarily, Although there are too similar video or painting advertisement on media today which looks like they were produced by the same company, we could still find some fantastic works which stimulate our exciting by interesting ways. For instance, As we know the advertising of the cars, sometimes it shows the function of the car with a vivid way, which makes the car as a animal like tiger or dolphin who has fast speed or fluency of appearance. So we can get happy feeling from the imaginations of the advertisement. More over, excellent advertising have incredible character normally. Although we
