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My good friend's name is Eason,when I first met he ,he looking in blue.He has short black hair,he is tall than me.One day ,I didn't pass the test,I was worried that my parent will don't allow me to watch TV,just in that time,he walked toward my desk,he sat down without saying anything,he said something meanful.After that day ,we become good friends.Although we don't stay together anymore.But I will never forget he--my good friend --always