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Some people think it's all bad for children to watch TV, others believe watching TV can bring positive effects on children when they grow up, discuss both and give your own opinion.
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参考过去出现的相关题目可以帮助同学们更好地解题：文中词汇使用较丰富，学术词汇使用要加强；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；请注意分段。
The story starts a note book,a old lady sits near a table that listen to a old man told the story of the notebook.t in the sanatorium.they do this every day .In a summer holiday ,a girl named Ellie comes small town to avoid summer heat with her family.She is pretty and rich .She meets a boy named Noah in a party down.They are attracted to each other .although Noah only is a poor worker,they still love the like a raging fire. But Ellie 'parents look down on Noah and want their daughter to New York Unversity to separated them.When the family are gone ,Noah writes a letter every day for a year. They are hid by Ellie'selfish mother .The second world war break out,so Noah becomes a soldier and Ellie becomes a volunteer as a nurse .Over seven years,an officer appeared and loved her .When he asked her to marry him ,she promised.The war is end,Noah comes and sees his father sold their house.So he buys a house that they dated.One day ,Noah sees Ellie in the street with a man.He collapsed.Ellie sees the newspaper and know the former lover didn't die .She is very painful and decide to sees him in the small town .They got together again.After a few years,Noah stays with Ellie who doesn't remember nothing and read notebook to her.
