2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

可适当增加从句和长句的使用；作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用学术词汇；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

Nowadays,shopping online are becoming more and more popular.Many people can buy things without going out. There are many advantages in shopping online,such as you don't have to go out to buy what you want,and there are more products you can select online.The most important is it's very convenient.But there is the thing.You think you don't have to go out for shopping,so you will always stay at home or dormitory.Second,if you surf the internet usually like taobao,you'll buy lots of things you don't need.Third,some of the products in the internet are not reliable.Last,you may spend more money shopping online. In my point of view,shopping online should keep your mind.When you shopping online,you should ask yourself,"Are these things I really need?"And pay more attention on the comment .Although shopping online is convenient,go out shopping in the supermarket is not bad.