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To be a greener person The earth is our family and Protecting enviroment is our responsiblility.In order to get this goal,we should know what to do and what not do. Firstly,we shouldn't waste any water.Turning off the tap in time, recycle water- you can use the water which you wash your face to water flowers. Secondly,walking or taking bus instead of driving to reduce carbon dioxide leting. The last one but it it very important that you should do by yourself and forbidden the bad behavior.