字数:200满分:100分
文章用词灵活多样,学术词汇使用也比较准确;能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。
Described in the picture is a hotpot which concludes large numbers of different culture elements, such as kong-fu, peking-opera, ballet and so on. At the lower part of it we can see several chinese characters which reads:”the hotpot of culture,being of deliciousness and health." No surprisingly, the drawer of the picture intends to convey more instructive meanings. Indeed, the globalization of culture has grown fashionable recently, a good case coming in my mind is a photo, which indicates a lovely foreign girl who is wearing traditional clothes concerning chinese minority, in a daily newspaper. Moreover, as long as the emergency of the internet, people found the pathway for getting in touch with friends aboard. Undoubtedly, the internet also plays a key role in keeping that those well-meaning mutual initiatives translate into better interactions. From my personal perspective, the lasting change can only be effected by the general public themselves. Suggesting that the authority should try to encourage their interactions to have a mutual understanding.