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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17432
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分69.5分
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作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用;有效的运用了一些复杂句。

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Nowadays, more and more people have their own computers. Obviously, computer has been a indispensible part of our daily life. Of course, computer brings us much fun, but it also brings us trouble. So, the existence of computer is good or not, people have their own opinions. For people who think it is good may say that we can use computer to learn knowledges as far as we want; and when we tired, we can listen to music, watch movies or even play games online to relax ourself, both body and mind. Use computer properly, our life will be more colourful. In contrast, these who againist it may say that many people waste their lives because of computer games, especially teenagers. And computer is bad to people's eyes and body health. It is seems that both of them are right. In my opinion, computer can make our lives more colourful, also it can waste our time. It is only depend on how to use it. So, computer and man, man and computer, they are correlate, believe that man can use computer to make tomorrow better.

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