Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。
From the picture we can see that knowledge is so important.As the people's degree become higher,the unemployment rate become lower,and the median weekly earnings become higher. Date back to the old day,people always thought that knowledge was important,and the more knowledge they had,the more admirable they'll be.Nowadays,I wonder that if knowledge still important. The answer is "Yes".Here are the reasons.To start with,knowledgable is our traditional manner,It's our fortune.Secondly,today's society need people with skills and knowledge. So we should study hard and learn more knowledge.