Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
文中词汇表达多样性不足,在学术词汇方面尤其要多积累;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。
From the picture we can see that knowledge is so important.As the people's degree become higher,the unemployment rate become lower,and the median weekly earnings become higher. Date back to the old day,people always thought that knowledge was important,and the more knowledge they got,the more admirable they'll be.Nowadays,I wonder that if knowledge is still important. The answer is "Yes".Here are the reasons.To start with,knowledgable is our traditional manner,It's our fortune.Secondly,today's society need people with skills and knowledge. So we should study hard and get more knowledge.