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it is unwise to judge immediately just by what you seeing or hearing.At many occations, people judges by what they seeing and hearing.Yes,seeing is believing can be very correct in most facts, we judge facts with envidences we've got, the facts we seeing and hearing makes we commiting about it. However,sometimes,what we seen and heard can not be ture. For example, a father take foods to his son everyday, we may complained that the son shouldn't behave like that,he should take more care of his father.But the real turth is his father hates outdoor exercises ,he want his father do more outdoor activities,then he suggested his father to take foods for him. As far as I am concerned, we judge by what we seeing and hearing is reasonabliy,but it unwise to judge only by what we seeing and hearing. We should know facts in all concepts and commit it objectly.
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