高一英语作文模拟题:文明的举止

作者应适量增加从句的使用量；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细。

China is now more and more involved in international events, so it is necessary for us to improve the qualities of the citizens as manners play an important role in international communication. In our city many people have bad behave.Forexplem,when someone lie om the gound,nobody helps him to go to the hospital.Secondly,somepeople always speak londly in the public place. As far as i am concerned,people should give up these bad behave and delovep the good behave in that our city or our country in a good environment.