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The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication The internet on interpersonal communication is essencial for every person.If a person want to achieve success,the good internet on interpersonal communication is one of the essencial reasons. We will communicate with many people in the society.They have different features .Some people are kind,and some persons are wise and so on.If we are not good at communicating with them,we will be laughed by them,or we maybe can not make many friends.When we talk about business with others,if we are not good at communicating,we maybe will lose opportunity to coorperate with others. So we must be good at communicating with different people.What we said should make people happy and like communicating with us . In my openion,the internet on interpersonal communication is essencial for every person.Good ability of internet on interperson communication would make us achieve success more easily.
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