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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4567
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题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分62.0分
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作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文中词汇表达贫乏,学术词汇还要加强,词汇拼写要认真;文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑,结构缺少组织;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

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The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication The internet on interpersonal communication is essencial for every person.If a person want to achieve success,the good internet on interpersonal communication is one of the essencial reasons. We will communicate with many people in the society.They have different features .Some people are kind,and some persons are wise and so on.If we are not good at communicating with them,we will be laughed by them,or we maybe can not make many friends.When we talk about business with others,if we are not good at communicating,we maybe will lose opportunity to coorperate with others. So we must be good at communicating with different people.What we said should make people happy and like communicating with us . In my openion,the internet on interpersonal communication is essencial for every person.Good ability of internet on interperson communication would make us achieve success more easily.

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