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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33618
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分65.5分
评语:

作者应适量增加从句的使用量;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,学术词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

The question that how can you become a smart consumer trigger hot debate among students in the university. Different people have different opinions . Some students think you should buy the goods in discount, and you can buy something on the group-buy website. On the contrary, other people think that the best way to save monney is buy the goods you really need to whatever it is in a sale. As far as i'am , i support the late opinion. the reason why i think so as follows: On the one hand, some goods you buy are not because you need it, but you think it is in a sale, and it is good deal, at the result of , you put it aside after you brought it. it is waste your money , but save your money. On the other hand, most people are hot for the idea that they eat out or travel togerther,because they can enjoy the group-discount. However, you shouldn't have spent the money , if you don't eat out and travel. As us kown, travel will spent a lot , even you look for group-buy deals. In a word, if you want to save money in life , the frist step is make you become a wise cosumers. You should buy the goods you need, not influenced your cosumption behavior by the discout or other sales activity.

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