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The question that how can you become a smart consumer trigger hot debate among students in the university. Different people have different opinions . Some students think you should buy the goods in discount, and you can buy something on the group-buy website. On the contrary, other people think that the best way to save monney is buy the goods you really need to whatever it is in a sale. As far as i'am , i support the late opinion. the reason why i think so as follows: On the one hand, some goods you buy are not because you need it, but you think it is in a sale, and it is good deal, at the result of , you put it aside after you brought it. it is waste your money , but save your money. On the other hand, most people are hot for the idea that they eat out or travel togerther,because they can enjoy the group-discount. However, you shouldn't have spent the money , if you don't eat out and travel. As us kown, travel will spent a lot , even you look for group-buy deals. In a word, if you want to save money in life , the frist step is make you become a wise cosumers. You should buy the goods you need, not influenced your cosumption behavior by the discout or other sales activity.