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衔接词和过渡词用的很不错；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；文中能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇，但词汇表达多样性不高，拼写检查还需加强。
if a foreign friend of mine comes to my hometown,i will take him to museum. As is known to all, museum is one of the meaning place in acquancing a city. Three resons give rises to my choice.For one thing.there are so many historical culture including economy,culture and policy from the anchient time to now. If a man who want to know a city is recommended to visit the city mesuem, nothing is a better choice than this. For another thing,not only does the museum poccess the most overall history,but also it has a great number of historcal relics. For the reason given above, I believe that it can adequantly indicate why i would like to take him to the city museum.
