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if a foreign friend of I comes to my hometown, museum is the most interesting place i will take him to . As is known to all, museum,which has a long and rich history ,is one of the meaning place in acquancing a city. Three resons give rises to my choice.For one thing.there are so many historical culture including economy,culture and politics from the anchient time to now. If a man who wants to know a city should be recommended to visit the city mesuem, nothing is a better choice than this.For another thing,not only does the museum poccess the most overall history,but also it has a great number of historcal relics. For the reason given above, I believe that it can adequantly indicate why i would like to take him to the city museum.
