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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71660
要求:
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;句式变化较为明显,另外句法层面做的不错;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细。

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if a foreign friend of I comes to my hometown, museum is the most interesting place i will take him to . As is known to all, museum,which has a long and rich history ,is one of the meaning place in acquainting a city. Three resons give rises to my choice.For one thing.there are so many historical culture including economy,culture and politics from the anchient time to now. If a man who wants to know a city should be recommended to visit the city mesuem, nothing is a better choice than this.For another thing,not only does the museum poccess the most overall history,but also it has a great number of historcal relics. For the reason given above, I believe that it can adequantly indicate why i would like to take him to the city museum.

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