2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升,学术词汇使用过少;文中简单词汇偏多,应适当增加从句使用;上下文衔接欠佳,文章层次欠清晰,建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累。
More and more people think that relaxing ourselves is good for us,especially after the exam.Some people think that doing some sports also will make us feel better.And the others say we can listen to some musics or watch some interesting movies.They also say we can go hiking to relax us. I think their opinions have points.In my opinion,I suggest you to read some books,also can write articles.It's very good.If you do,I believe you will feel relax. Hope you get better!