2013年考研英语作文预测话题：沟通的意义

作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达，但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；作者句法基础不错，可适当增加复杂句的使用；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用。

As is vividly depicted in the picture, there is a tall tree with plenty of fruits on its top. One man making great effort to climb up the tree, while the other man just lies down under the tree, opens his mouth and waiting for fruits to fall down. The different behaviors of the two people reflect the opposite attitudes of people when they facing with ideal and practice. Below the drawing, there is a caption which says, “people who believe the fate wait for happiness, while people who not believe create happiness.” The purpose of the cartoon is to show us that people who actively practice his idea,will his persistence pay off finally. On the one hand, rather than doing nothing but waiting passively for good fortune to strike us, we can give full scope to creativity. On the other hand, the more efforts we make, the more possibility we will get the “fruit” of life . There is no doubt that we should make great efforts to chasing our dreams. Only in these way, can we achieve finally.