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sidewalk 人行道 zebra-crossing 斑马线
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With more and more cars coming into our families,we are happy that it has greatly improved our life.But unluckily,it has also brought many problems,such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents.
文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；上下文衔接稍显不流畅；文中词汇表达较为灵活，学术词汇需要加强，单词拼写要认真。
with more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improed our life. but unlucky, it has also brought many problems, suc as heavy traffic and traffic accidents. as a middle-school student, how should we do to ensure our transportation safety in the transportation? firstly, we should obey the transportation rules, such as walking the zebra-crossing line when we go through the road. This a simple and important good habit that everyone can benefit from it. Secondly, do not paly or play the football in the street. it is very dangerous when you absorbed in the playing in the street, for there will be accidentally events anytime. Thirdly, we should persuad our parents not to drive car after drinking, because it is really dangerous. we must avoid tragical traffic accident.
