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拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。
Education as a lifelong process There is saying that it’s never too late to learn. That is more suitable for the modern life, it’s very important to learn as long as you growing old. Many people think that being educated is for the jobs or high education. But, in my opinion, education is a lifelong process. We will never be enough of the knowledge. Everything is about learning and can be learned. As a modern man, if we want to make progress and create something special, we should continue to learn and acquire knowledge so that we have the ability to change the world and progress. Besides, education can also be treated as a mental foraging. The modern society is filed with all kinds of things that are lack of content. So we need to learn to fill our mind through the knowledge. Let’s image the life of us if we stop to learn. That must be very terrible. We have no dream and we have no direction of our life to pursue. How could we be happy in such a life. Human beings are born with nothing. When we were babies, we didn’t know anything. So we were curious about the new world and we got something. But that is not enough. There are so many interesting things waiting for us to learn by step and step. If we don’t learn any more. What a pity for us. You would be staying at the same place and could not go on. No matter how old are you, never stop to learn. It is because of the education, our life can be decorated colorful and we have the driver to go on.
