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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第38篇: 学生学习历史和文学是否比学习科学和数学更重要

发布时间:2013-08-16 16:48浏览次数:4083
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

It is more important for students to study history and literature than it is for them to study science and mathematics.

Use specific reasons to support your opinion.

学生学习历史和文学是否比学习科学和数学更重要。你的观点是?并给出原因。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分71.5分
评语:

文章词汇表达比较灵活,学术词汇的使用要继续加强;文章中的过程性词汇比较丰富;句式变化较为明显,另外句法层面做的不错;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

We always judge things as we see not they are,since it we would learn more things and so that help us to judge the thing and by different ways.I think that is why we should learn.At present,we always learn the pop subjects and ignore other the same important.For example,does it more important for students to study history and literature than it is for them to study science and mathematics or instead?In my way,I would rather think the same important of two both.Not only those can open your view but also can show you a world that can touch your heart deep.Now I show you a example.Imaging you are a doctor and you are checking with a patient,then you should explain to patient what is going on in her or his body.You should write it in detail so that the patient can understand.So have you noticed?Above of all what doctor done should have good skills of literature and science. It does not exist which more important subject of what we should learn.We know so less to everything and if we want to live more wisdom we should learn more and if necessary,we should give up everything we know and use another way to treat specail things.

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