Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
能较灵活地使用学术词汇,希望能改善用词单一的情况;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构;请注意分段。
nowadays,the Internet using become more and more popular.Development of technology push the speed of development of internet rapidly.People not only use computer to surf internet,but also cellphone.function of internet includes watching move,listening music and Especially the function of communication.More and more people use the internet to communicate with someone.Even though someone just use internet to communicate and refuse to face-to-face to talk with people .It's not a good sense.As for this picture,it is reflected a circumstance that parents should have used computer to talk with children and children drug into internet not face to his parents.In my opinion,internet could not replace face-to-face contacting.Because the goal of communication is made people closer.Just using internet to communicate to replace face-to-face contacting is made people distantly.