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Some people think it's all bad for children to watch TV, others believe watching TV can bring positive effects on children when they grow up, discuss both and give your own opinion.
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It is true that TV program and computer games have occupied most our spare life and it is same between children. In my opinion, it seems not benefit within this situation and parents should not allow this happened on their children. In terms of watching TV program, the young adult are tending to watch the same show with their friends. As we know that girls usually indulge in the TV real show about music and TV series related to love as well as boys can not miss the football match that their friends are watching on the same TV channel. These programs spend so much time that the left part afford on the studies is decreasing. In the same that young adults have lost the change of reading books and make new friends in life, which is more important than just talking the context of TV programs with friends in the next day. On the other hand, the computer games addicting between youngsters have been a serous society problem. Most of the games are commercial products and the target is to attract people spend more time and more money on it by endless upset level in the game. Boys always want get higher level than their friends to prove their abilities over their counterparts. In fact, that the virtual world is not a good substitution for the real society for the young generation. Parents should encourage their children go out to take part in more physical activities and communicate with different person, which is they should rich their relaxing time. In conclusion, TV program and computer game have rich our life in many factors, but the parents should not allow their children cost too much time on it.
