2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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The above statistics from Bureau of Labor Statistics vividly description that the unemployment rate was gradully reducing and Median weekly earnings is stedily increasing which through the study level. The people of doctoral degree is the most expensive spend in median weekly earnings and whom found the job is easily. However, what are reasons for it? To began with, with the development of society, every country are increadiblely neeed to tecnique person. They need these people to contribute to country. Moreover,corporation is also seeking the high talent people whom can benifit to company's development. Finally, quite a few people are try to improve their diploma in order to find a satisfied job that high earning and comfortable enviroment. To sum up, if you desire to find a good job, it's necessary that learn more and imorove to some diploma.